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Are you comfortable?

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You there laying in your bed,

Under the covers

With your pajamas on...

Are you comfortable?

I love the sweet smell of your hair,

I love the soft touch of your skin,

I love how your are so oblivious,

Are you comfortable now? 

Because your soft and subtle breathing tells me that you haven't noticed me yet... :)

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Joey
Comments: 2
#6 Joey 2017-01-27 19:00
I am so confused was the adopted person a human or an animal :shock: :shock: :shock: :ttt :wiz:
Ally
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#5 Ally 2017-01-15 03:55
that had given me the chills a little but i still think it ahouldve used more details who else thinks that?
Ari'ana
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#4 Ari'ana 2014-06-03 16:28
Quoting Loralei:
Very good... Maybe more details into the story and what it wants or something.

No there is a person in the readers room with them and they don't know yet. Its like a stalker thing
:o
sophia
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#3 sophia 2014-06-02 20:15
its too short :scr: :uuu :zzz :i: it could use more detail
Loralei
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#2 Loralei 2014-05-31 21:55
Very good... Maybe more details into the story and what it wants or something.
Ari'ana
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#1 Ari'ana 2014-05-30 14:32
First story guys. It may suck but I tried lol!!
(P.S. I would love some constructive criticism)

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